Vii and iii

PSPW 5iii

a.  check in about Engrade and grading questions; parents’ night; how many will be out for field trip next week?

B block:

Stories: focus on two moves--opening and one other.

What’s the goal of the opening?  What are you trying to accomplish?  How can you accomplish this?

One other move--name it and then explain it [examples from my NY speech]

Share drafts; comment on parts that need to be expanded; read (to each other) the openings the the special move.  Make suggestions.  Share?


Best restaurant work:  B--paper pass to get quotations.

Tape for HW

If time, my Parents’ Night presentation


F block: same work with stories;

essays: what help from me do you need in order to be able to convert yesterday’s work into an introduction and 3 paragraphs?

Name the restaurant that meets your criteria: 10 presentations; discuss match paragraphs (we’ll write these in class tomorrow)

HW: tape